Thursday, January 22, 2009

Plog #1: The Good-Morrow

THE GOOD-MORROW
by John Donne

I
WONDER by my troth, what thou and I
Did, till we loved ? were we not wean'd till then ?
But suck'd on country pleasures, childishly ?
Or snorted we in the Seven Sleepers' den ?
'Twas so ; but this, all pleasures fancies be ;
If ever any beauty I did see,
Which I desired, and got, 'twas but a dream of thee.

And now good-morrow to our waking souls,
Which watch not one another out of fear ;
For love all love of other sights controls,
And makes one little room an everywhere.

Let sea-discoverers to new worlds have gone ;
Let maps to other, worlds on worlds have shown ;
Let us possess one world ; each hath one, and is one.

My face in thine eye, thine in mine appears,
And true plain hearts do in the faces rest ;
Where can we find two better hemispheres
Without sharp north, without declining west ?
Whatever dies, was not mix'd equally ;
If our two loves be one, or thou and I
Love so alike that none can slacken, none can die.



Love can be a very strange, confusing, and ambiguous feeling/emotion. Few people are born with the capability to express it in a smooth, flowing, and understandable fashion. John Donne was one of those persons who could make it crystal clear of how he was feeling. In the "Good-Morrow," through the structure and careful selection of words, Donne demonstrates how he can reveal his emotions, affection, and love to his significant other.

The structure of the poem works similar to an hourglass for there are three different stanzas; the past, the present, and the what falls ahead. In the first stanza, the speaker describes his initial approach to love. At this moment, he was very promiscuous saying that "If ever any beauty I did see, Which I desired, and got..." and "But sucked on country pleasures, childishly?" The way he handles his love life is very explicit and even pig like. Words like "troth" and "snorted" give you the image of a pig, an animal many consider nasty and unruly.


All of this was done until he meets his lover and he arrives to the present in stanza two. The first line says "And now good-morrow to our waking souls." The image that is created is one where the speaker literally wakes up from his dream. Waking plays an important role in the meaning of this sentence on a metaphoric level. Things that are associated with waking are a sunrise, a new day, or a new beginning. So on a deeper level from the first two lines, the speaker is saying good morning to the new beginning which we both do not fear.

The last stanza depicts how the speaker sees the future. He believes that they are a great (maybe even perfect) couple by saying "Where can we find two better hemispheres." He and his significant other are two halfs to a whole or two hemispheres to the earth. They come together better than any others to make this whole/"earth"/love. The poem concludes with the idea that their love is eternal. He says that their love will not decay, weaken, or die.

3 comments:

BooBooMyLove said...

Wow, i never looked at the poem like that. I really liked how u saw how the poem was structured. I think that plays an important part and creates an effect on the poem when you think about it because you think of time when you seen an hour-glass figure...or a woman.Lol. Also, i liked how u saw the whole pig thing, another thing i didnt realize. Mann Trelly...Lol good job! ahaha.
But i agree with the words, he chose some pretty intersting words that express his feelings clearly. I think so far, this is my favorite poem. Lol It's not so hard to comprehend. ahaha.

kosekesh said...

i really like the idea of the pig. i neva woulda thought of that! it really does lend itself 2that idea, i didn't put 2gether the snort thing and the troth. that's really cool!! i like the commentary that you make about the perfect love thing too, it's insightful. it is slightly hopeless romantic, but that's what u were given 2 work with, so i guess i'll 4give u. i think the way that you talk bout the 2 1/2's of a whole is really insightful, i thought bout it, but not in the same way. i think i like ur interp of the poem the best outta the 1's i read.

Ms. D. said...

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